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Flash Fiction Friday : Eyes Write

Friday, 11 June 2010

His eyes said, ‘Dance with me.’
His wife’s said, ‘Don’t.’
She answered them both with a single, silent message.
‘It’ll cost you.’




Today's Flash Fiction Friday story is a guest post by Susan Howe. Sue is both beautiful and brilliant. She said to say. She blogs over at the long and the short of it, where you can find more of her short fiction. It's well worth a read.


Flash Fiction Friday is a weekly post of a work of fiction small enough to appear on Twitter etc.

Posted by Simon Kewin at 07:00

9 comments:

  1. fairyhedgehog11 June 2010 at 08:12

    That's a great story. I love it when flash says everything in so few words.

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  2. Simon Kewin11 June 2010 at 08:37

    fairyhedgehog,

    Yes, it's very nicely done. I must ask Sue whether it really happened!

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  3. K M Kelly11 June 2010 at 09:13

    Nice one Simon :-)

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  4. Simon Kewin11 June 2010 at 09:25

    Thanks Kate (on behalf of Sue!)

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  5. Old Kitty11 June 2010 at 11:39

    Excellent!! I love this one!! Funny too.

    :-)

    Take care
    x

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  6. Simon Kewin11 June 2010 at 12:18

    Old Kitty,

    Thanks. Do check out some of her other stories as there are some in a similar vein.

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  7. Susan Howe11 June 2010 at 12:41

    Simon, would you like to be my agent? You're doing a grand job so far!

    Many thanks for the kind remarks, everyone.
    Sue

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  8. Simon Kewin11 June 2010 at 12:44

    Sue,
    Hmm, can you afford me though?

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  9. Susan Howe11 June 2010 at 16:07

    Depends what kind of a deal you get me.

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